I loved the plot and I typically like poetic writing but the style for this didn’t fully work for me, it was almost overwritten or felt like they were trying too hard to be poetic. Some of the sentences felt clunky and didn’t flow very well.
If it was executed better I would love it, still enjoyed reading though!
I loved the plot and I typically like poetic writing but the style for this didn’t fully work for me, it was almost overwritten or felt like they were trying too hard to be poetic. Some of the sentences felt clunky and didn’t flow very well.
If it was executed better I would love it, still enjoyed reading though!